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五绝•咏莲

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Posted: 2010-07-01 04:45:49 Post subject: 五绝•咏莲

五绝•咏莲倾城云热尽，卧处起凉风。藕醒通天下，荷花别样红。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-07-02 04:36:03 Post subject:

毕竟西湖六月中，风光不与四时同。接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红。相得益彰！

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Posted: 2010-07-02 18:42:25 Post subject:

请教影兄,"藕"与"偶"谐音,是否利用谐音,偶醒而通天下? _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-07-03 02:23:22 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

请教影兄,"藕"与"偶"谐音,是否利用谐音,偶醒而通天下?

没有。

这句是接上句的，藕有很多孔，所以用了通天下

醒字是接前面卧处的，在清风中醒来
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