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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 16:57:40    Post subject: 戏笔一组•试拟四言律诗 Reply with quote

四言律诗格式

平起式

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⊙——可平可仄。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 17:03:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

【001】

平生所学,汉字三千。
纵有诗赋,难为圣贤。
人前迂腐,梦里缠绵。
知足常乐,红尘半仙。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 17:04:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

【002】

身如野鹤,开卷成仙。
与地同寿,和天并肩。
人生多彩,欢乐无边。
历尽灾难,赢来淡然。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 17:05:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

【003】

清秋万里,对月当歌。
人剩残岁,诗吟烂柯。
曾经荒废,不复蹉跎。
情系东汉,心追手摹。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 17:07:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

【004】

蜗舍求雅,横陈管弦。
虽非高士,却有奇篇。
造句平淡,倾心自然。
平时所好,浮想联翩。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 17:08:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

【005】

模拟唐宋,形神逼真。
生存当代,重复前人。
都去崇古,谁来创新?
千篇一律,浪费青春。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 17:13:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

【006】

楚汉风雨,今晨入窗。
轻看韩信,误放刘邦。
凭勇争霸,何颜过江。
虞姬吕雉,差距无双。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 17:30:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

【007】

闲览唐宋,何其爽哉。
平庸易得,陈腐堪哀。
妙出佳句,奇生怪才。
每逢开卷,如逛蓬莱。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-28 08:26:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

【008】

秋风萧瑟,篱菊娇妍。
霜满寒舍,诗娱暮年。
移居城市,告别林泉。
宁静依旧,心为洞天。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-28 08:27:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

【009】

桑梓新貌,红楼粉墙。
蝉鸣堤柳,鱼戏荷塘。
邻舍编篓,瓜棚送香。
回村采访,摄影千张。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 18:01:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

【010】

暗自怀远,村姑少眠。
竹疏篱外,梅瘦窗前。
冬夜徒泣,春风枉还。
山盟犹在,岁岁年年。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 18:03:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

【011】

亲友来贺,携孙过庭。
人歌上寿,天与稀龄。
玉宇微粒,书坛巨星。
期颐犹远,岁岁康宁。

孙过庭(646~691)。中国唐代书法家,书法理论家。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 18:04:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

【012】

举手投足,文明大方。
温柔贤淑,活泼端庄。
田野蝴蝶,山村凤凰。
芳名在口,舌齿生香。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 18:06:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

【013】

桃偷面色,柳学身轻。
语似莺啭,歌如凤鸣。
田园流汗,城市留名。
花送千户,人人动情。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 15:27:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

【014】

群杰争冠,攻难破艰。
苍天眷顾,命运玩悭。
跪拜求罪,欢呼过关。
英雄成败,转瞬之间。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 15:28:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

【014】

群杰争冠,攻难破艰。
苍天眷顾,命运玩悭。
跪拜求罪,欢呼过关。
英雄成败,转瞬之间。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 15:29:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

【015】

徐娘半老,岁月无痕。
风韵如故,娇羞夺魂。
胸盈春水,目漾朝暾。
时代前进,凌波紧跟。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 21:25:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

【016】

历史遗恨,谁能忘哀。
欺贫酿祸,瞒上成灾。
正气难保,妖风总来。
冰成于水,泡沫生财。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 21:31:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

【017】

时闻蟋蟀,懒妇方惊。
霜袭乌鬓,寒侵碧城,
玉峰行坠,秋水难盈。
回首初恋,芳心失衡。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-30 21:32:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

【018】

南风送爽,雨溅窗台。
司马迟至,文君乱猜。
身孤思伴,家富轻财。
妾愿投奔,缘何不来?
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