笑聊
探花
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 Posted: 2010-06-15 01:05:30 Post subject: 七律-- 端午有感 |
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山河泪洒恸千秋，寂寞英魂屑入流。
柳絮飞扬回碧水，玉兰开放祭神州。
九天呜咽阴沉脸，五岳哀思静注眸。
点额雄黄驱鬼魅，忠良代代话绵稠。 |
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虎王
童生
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| Posted: 2010-06-27 12:08:22 Post subject: |
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| 感得深，对得工，结得意味深长，欣赏、学习！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-06-27 13:23:24 Post subject: |
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| 笑聊兄，“屑入流”请教何解？ |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-06-27 14:23:41 Post subject: |
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[quote="qinghongh"]笑聊兄，“屑入流”请教何解？[/quote]
“屑入流”，不屑入流。结合屈原生前品格，死后亦当如此。
谢庆宏兄雅读！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-06-27 14:30:00 Post subject: |
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| 谢笑聊兄解释。 |
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王国栋
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Joined: 09 Jul 2010
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| Posted: 2010-07-09 05:55:26 Post subject: |
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工稳!弟学习了。
_________________
文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。 |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-07-09 16:05:16 Post subject: |
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[quote="王国栋"]工稳!弟学习了。[/quote]
谢谢雅誉！ |
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