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七律-- 端午祭
笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-06-09 05:03:15    Post subject: 七律-- 端午祭 Reply with quote

端午来临,民间祭奠;每到此时,感慨悲伤;正直之人,如此下场;天理何在,呜呼哀飨。

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流水潺潺不复还,清风卷翠满坡喧。

哀歌一曲山河动,默念三章史册寒。

呼啸岭南凭热血,飞沙塞外盈泪潸。

民间岁岁龙舟赛,华夏精神代代传。


注:三章:泛指。
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影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2010-06-09 05:27:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

三章?
九章?
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诗无涯。思在线
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-06-09 06:22:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="影沉寒水"]三章?
九章?[/quote]

三章:泛指。
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宁家珍
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PostPosted: 2010-06-13 21:04:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏佳作,问候笑聊版主。端午节快乐!
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-06-14 05:46:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="宁家珍"]欣赏佳作,问候笑聊版主。端午节快乐![/quote]
谢谢诗友赏读!问候诗友,节日愉快!
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-06-14 18:14:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

端午怀古,问好笑聊!
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-06-15 01:21:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="黄洋界"]端午怀古,问好笑聊![/quote]

问候黄老师!端阳节快乐!
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穆平
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PostPosted: 2010-06-16 01:23:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

端 阳入仲夏,
午 餐苇粽香。
节 日人潮涌。
好 拜屈子堂。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-06-16 02:41:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好穆平!诗人节愉快!
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2010-06-16 08:27:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

祝笑聊兄及众诗友端午节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-17 04:41:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="qinghongh"]祝笑聊兄及众诗友端午节快乐![/quote]

谢谢庆宏兄关怀!节日同乐!
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虎王
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 12:06:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

哀歌一曲山河动,默念三章史册寒。

呼啸岭南凭热血,飞沙塞外盈泪潸。

对仗可酌。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-06-27 14:26:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="虎王"]哀歌一曲山河动,默念三章史册寒。
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谢虎王雅读!期盼指正。问好!
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