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荒沙夜曲之《去留之间》

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白水
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Posted: 2010-06-19 04:29:10 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

做一个一条胡同走到底的瞎子
黑白与我，无光无色

很有禅意

谢谢peace.
诗歌，从某种角度，是一个记录吧。
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《荒沙夜曲》，每一篇都有移民生活的故事原型。较懒，就先写成诗歌，抽空也留点笔记，或许哪天勤快了打点”随笔“出来。

我想你拥有的素材，必定好看，期待
我在应该超出诗歌许多
于我，诗歌仅仅为了说出有意义的话
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说出有意义的话是最重要的，愿你写出更多更好的诗歌。

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Posted: 2010-06-19 04:32:43 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

旧作新贴：
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谢谢庆红。
悄悄问一句，去留之间现在还在选择吗？ Very Happy

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Posted: 2010-06-19 04:42:39 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

问好！在时光隧道里，一切都擦肩而过。如果静止了，就回到了现实。
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问好少君。移民生活中有太多的擦肩：
昨日的挚友今日回国，昨日的夫妻近日分离（或死亡，或离异，据调查统计数据，亚裔移民离婚率高达50-60%，或许迫于压力？）在此，谨祝愿人们走好。

哈，又留点素材 Wink

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Posted: 2010-06-19 04:51:06 Post subject:

人生有许多犹豫与彷徨，但如果真能做到学会少一点停留在以往的光影，少一点考虑自我，或许会多一些自由。这话中听 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2010-06-19 05:06:41 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

旧作新贴：
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谢谢庆红。
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谢谢白水兄垂询。红尘清风，塞翁自懂。我非去留徘徊之人。

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Posted: 2010-06-19 05:19:47 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

旧作新贴：
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谢谢庆红。
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谢谢白水兄垂询。红尘清风，塞翁自懂。我非去留徘徊之人。

哈，又一个一条胡同走到底的瞎子。喜欢这两句：红尘清风，塞翁自懂。
临屏一个 Razz

打马回车去留中，信步弹丸五洲同
塞翁得失平常事，笑傲红尘舞清风

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Posted: 2010-06-19 18:59:13 Post subject:

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人生有许多犹豫与彷徨，但如果真能做到学会少一点停留在以往的光影，少一点考虑自我，或许会多一些自由。
这话中听

谢谢理解。
为何久不见你的新诗？

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Posted: 2010-06-19 22:15:34 Post subject:

人生有许多犹豫与彷徨，但如果真能做到学会少一点停留在以往的光影，少一点考虑自我，或许会多一些自由。 _________________ 陕西姜华

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Posted: 2010-06-20 19:26:26 Post subject:

江南雨 wrote:

人生有许多犹豫与彷徨，但如果真能做到学会少一点停留在以往的光影，少一点考虑自我，或许会多一些自由。

do you agree? Cool

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