Maple Review :: View topic - 阳光，五月

	Chinese Literature Society of North America \| Maple Review \| Immigrants in Canada \| Angel Studio \| The Driftwood Artist Society \| Ocean of Poetry \| Island of Music "HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
	FAQ Search Memberlist Usergroups Register Profile Log in to check your private messages Sign in Blogs Weblogs News Album



Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

阳光，五月

子在川上曰
举人

Joined: 18 Nov 2009
Posts: 1314

子在川上曰Collection

Posted: 2010-06-11 22:24:19 Post subject: 阳光，五月

文/深圳子在川上曰她的发丝是柔顺的她的睫毛长长的她的声音脆脆的她的目光，每到清晨，会有一层薄薄的雾霭她的长裙是绿的她的香气是透明的她走路时多么的轻盈她的心事，天啦，怎么掉在了地上这个五月，阳光在她的长裙上花朵般的绽放小心翼翼的，她像抱着多年前摔破了那个瓷器姓名：陈宝川地址：深圳市宝安区福永怀德芳华三区第9栋福怡巷1号能达办公设备(福怡大厦正后面) 邮编：518103 电话：13922879062 邮箱：nengda@126.com _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

山城子
榜眼

Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
山城子Collection

Posted: 2010-06-11 23:52:06 Post subject:

她的心事，天啦，怎么掉在了地上 ——很出新！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

金金
进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
金金Collection

Posted: 2010-06-12 00:21:51 Post subject:

很形象，想看到你诗里真正的高贵 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2010-06-19 19:16:28 Post subject:

生动，清新

湮雨朦朦
秀才

Joined: 18 May 2009
Posts: 213
Location: 江西省南昌市
湮雨朦朦Collection

Posted: 2010-06-19 22:22:58 Post subject:

诗人的诗歌最近很有风格,问好.

Display posts from previous:

Emoticons





View more Emoticons

Page 1 of 1 View previous topic View next topic

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME