杏仁儿 童生
Joined: 22 Mar 2007 Posts: 30
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Posted: 2007-03-24 05:07:58 Post subject: 临江仙-----春日 |
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细雨如烟轻扰梦,春风不解愁寒。花开花落未知年。寻他千百度,两鬓已生斑。
天若有情天易老,何须枉自空牵。心凝冷月爱应怜。薛涛涂彩锦,谁续此生缘? _________________ 观静水之深沉,品智者之无声 |
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和平岛 举人

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 1277 Location: Victoria, Canada 和平岛Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-24 06:46:09 Post subject: |
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非常喜欢
欢迎杏仁儿! _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-24 10:06:51 Post subject: |
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步韵和一首:
临江仙<三月>
窗外梨花吹雨雪, 案头宣纸凄寒. 舞文弄墨又一年. 填词情润笔, 燃烛泪凝斑.
皓月当真今夜去, 依依疏柳魂牵. 遥思挚友梦中怜. 轻舟何日返? 满载旧时缘. |
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杏仁儿 童生
Joined: 22 Mar 2007 Posts: 30
杏仁儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-24 17:46:21 Post subject: |
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临江仙----三月
三月柔风怜碧草,如今日暖光鲜。踏春游客不知还。桃花寻几朵,可把手儿牵?
最是离人心上苦,怕听柳叶鸣弦。丹青能把妙文连。他乡思皓月,千里共婵娟。 _________________ 观静水之深沉,品智者之无声 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-25 00:54:05 Post subject: |
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好缠绵哦。也欢迎一下  |
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