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就用一粒词语燃烧
寒丁
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 04:06:30    Post subject: 就用一粒词语燃烧 Reply with quote
就用一粒词语燃烧
文/寒丁

我用一粒词语燃烧
一只眼睛应该可以看到

开在窗户的火苗那个预期的顶端
精神已经抵达

雨水，逃离眼神
风和鸟鸣朝着同一个方向

挥动一下无力的臂膀
阳光恰好落在笑容
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 05:00:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
不错。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 05:20:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
一粒词语燃烧的诗意
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寒丁
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 16:34:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
杯中冲浪 wrote:
不错。

问好冲浪朋友，谢谢
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 18:36:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
阳光恰好落在笑容

VERY FRESH , THAT IS GOOD
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寒丁
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 23:21:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
阳光恰好落在笑容

VERY FRESH , THAT IS GOOD

感谢白水的品评，保持写作的新鲜状态很重要也很不容易。问好，握了，多指教就是了。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-23 20:46:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨光 wrote:
一粒词语燃烧的诗意

问好杨光，握
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PostPosted: 2007-03-23 21:22:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好寒丁,虽然短,却有嚼
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PostPosted: 2007-03-24 01:10:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
倾听书卷 wrote:
问好寒丁,虽然短,却有嚼

感谢书卷，握了
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