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因为所以
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PostPosted: 2010-06-12 18:05:22    Post subject: 因为所以 Reply with quote

《因为所以》


如果有一天
你的额头热了
你的心热了

你的身子热了

就是门缝太窄

就是因为没有如果
没有如果我爱你
门缝外面
就没有酸溜溜的眼睛
和酸溜溜的脚步

而此时
你和我 在不同的地方
都又酸又甜地
喝着因为
品着所以






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PostPosted: 2010-06-12 18:36:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有韵味的因为
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PostPosted: 2010-06-13 07:47:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

状态真好~情感饱满~~
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PostPosted: 2010-06-13 18:24:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

耐品。 Very Happy
问好少君
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PostPosted: 2010-06-17 05:01:57    Post subject: 谢谢 Reply with quote

谢谢楼上三位朋友光顾!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-18 05:11:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读,提上去。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-21 02:44:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢过狼孩----
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