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七律•步韵和逍遥候之《不许梅花寂寞开》
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PostPosted: 2010-06-10 22:35:01    Post subject: 七律•步韵和逍遥候之《不许梅花寂寞开》 Reply with quote
七律•步韵和逍遥候之《不许梅花寂寞开》

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冷冷幽香傍水台，沉鱼疏影两徘徊。
横枝迎舞均天雪，处士停薰浊酒杯。
初命青君莺已识，暗传春讯雁何猜？
新鸣渐蓄冰魂势，不许梅花寂寞开。

2010-6-11
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PostPosted: 2010-06-11 14:40:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
冷冷幽香傍水台，沉鱼疏影两徘徊。
横枝迎舞均天雪，处士停薰浊酒杯。
初命青君莺已识，暗传春讯雁何猜？
新鸣渐蓄冰魂势，不许梅花寂寞开。

新鸣渐蓄冰魂势，不许梅花寂寞开。好句！
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PostPosted: 2010-06-12 23:25:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
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冷冷幽香傍水台，沉鱼疏影两徘徊。
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感谢笑聊版主鼓励。问好！
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PostPosted: 2010-06-23 23:45:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏好律，问好昕阳！
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PostPosted: 2010-06-24 05:57:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
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欣赏好律，问好昕阳！

谢虎王诗友鼓励。问好！
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