昕阳一片 秀才
Joined: 27 Mar 2010 Posts: 190
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Posted: 2010-06-10 22:35:01 Post subject: 七律•步韵和逍遥候之《不许梅花寂寞开》 |
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七律•步韵和逍遥候之《不许梅花寂寞开》
昕阳一片
冷冷幽香傍水台,沉鱼疏影两徘徊。
横枝迎舞均天雪,处士停薰浊酒杯。
初命青君莺已识,暗传春讯雁何猜?
新鸣渐蓄冰魂势,不许梅花寂寞开。
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-06-11 14:40:19 Post subject: |
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冷冷幽香傍水台,沉鱼疏影两徘徊。
横枝迎舞均天雪,处士停薰浊酒杯。
初命青君莺已识,暗传春讯雁何猜?
新鸣渐蓄冰魂势,不许梅花寂寞开。
新鸣渐蓄冰魂势,不许梅花寂寞开。好句! |
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昕阳一片 秀才
Joined: 27 Mar 2010 Posts: 190
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Posted: 2010-06-12 23:25:15 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
冷冷幽香傍水台,沉鱼疏影两徘徊。
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感谢笑聊版主鼓励。问好! |
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虎王 童生

Joined: 17 Jun 2010 Posts: 12
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Posted: 2010-06-23 23:45:44 Post subject: |
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欣赏好律,问好昕阳! |
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昕阳一片 秀才
Joined: 27 Mar 2010 Posts: 190
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Posted: 2010-06-24 05:57:34 Post subject: |
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谢虎王诗友鼓励。问好! |
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