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补丁
狼孩
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PostPosted: 2010-06-05 20:15:49    Post subject: 补丁 Reply with quote

《补丁》

云贴在蓝天上
阳光贴在大地上
蝴蝶贴在草原上
树贴在旷野上
雪贴在高山上
风贴在我的脸上
我贴在八百年前的老巷
抚着疯长的草和土墙
把古怪的思想钉在墙上
我不知道
谁能为它打上补丁

《石鼓敲响》

石鼓敲响
谁跳下去
让水回到水
谁站在山顶
让山升华为山
云在天上跑着
纵风踏上不归路
那双柔软的手
抚摸着坚硬的石头
欲望的大洪水
用每月一次的经血
浇灌生命的花草
谁在死亡
谁在生长
谁唱着情歌
一去不回


《你是我的情人》

我的天空
飘着一朵白云
我的风中
跳动一抹树影
我的阳光
晒在粮架杆上
我的泪水
注满无法遗忘的忘川
你是我的情人
你将和我一起
把这整个世界走完

你是我的情人
云会发布这个消息
风将传颂这个传说
阳光张贴这个故事
忘川收藏这部情诗
用虎鹿主持婚礼
江水唱起情歌
此时树上挂满红色果实
每一朵白云
全都悬挂着同样的飘带
你是我的情人


《你会不会为我留下》

我准备好了天空
云说来就来了
我准备好了树
风说到就到了
我准备好了月亮
雨说哭就哭了
我准备好了肩膀
花说开就开了
我准备好了路
你说走你就走了
我准备好了世界
也准备好了季节
你会不会为我留下
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2010-06-07 20:00:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

技巧和感觉有了。
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2010-06-08 04:02:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错。
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安红红
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PostPosted: 2010-06-13 08:16:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

到末了~也许自已是自已的补丁~~
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狼孩
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PostPosted: 2010-06-15 01:32:15    Post subject: 感谢韩老师缪赞,请您多批! Reply with quote

[quote="韩少君"]不错。[/quote]
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PostPosted: 2010-06-15 01:35:06    Post subject: 回复 Reply with quote

[quote="安红红"]到末了~也许自已是自已的补丁~~[/quote]

感谢红姐的关注。我想或许我们就仅仅是一块补丁,自己的,世界的。
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