宁家珍
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 Posted: 2010-06-04 09:12:29 Post subject: 和向东流[ 南乡一翦梅·茉莉] |
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和向东流[ 南乡一翦梅·茉莉]（旧韵）
宁家珍
端叶白头翁，溯水堂前玉树丛。
袅袅沿阶连月地，叶舞清风，花舞清风。
晨日沐花蓬，一缕幽香绕坐中。
楚楚芳姿摇欲坠，貌也玲珑，神也玲珑。
附向东流原玉
【南乡一剪梅 茉莉】
梅雨润娇容，素雅繁星点绿丛。
玉露依依魂欲滴，朝也香风，暮也香风。
柔骨绽玲珑，曼曳冰衣雪魄融。
一曲清音飘四海，茶韵情浓，诗韵情浓。 |
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老山
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| Posted: 2010-06-05 00:32:10 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏！ |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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| Posted: 2010-06-05 02:48:35 Post subject: |
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| 唱和俱佳！ |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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| Posted: 2010-06-05 06:55:18 Post subject: |
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| 和词稍优原玉。欣赏！ |
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宁家珍
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Joined: 20 May 2009
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Location: 中国黄山
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| Posted: 2010-06-05 22:13:57 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢老山版主来欣赏，问好！ |
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宁家珍
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Joined: 20 May 2009
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| Posted: 2010-06-05 22:16:08 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢笑聊版主的雅赏，望提宝贵意见。问好！ |
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