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风起于青萍之末>>>
湮雨朦朦
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PostPosted: 2010-06-02 04:44:06    Post subject: 风起于青萍之末>>> Reply with quote

内心的火车>>>

一个怒字 三月就成了粉红的附属
这柔弱无骨 如此接近我摇曳的幅度
以至桃花用我的姿势 在蓝色的云里和晨曦
融为一体 你制造出无比的波涛
在大地深处收藏这些残红的汹涌 我的内心
缤纷着一列火车 有青苗 有芦苇丛
有七月流火 有朦胧柳树的一排天空
轰隆过处 小草变成了细纹
悄悄爬上岁月的山谷

燃烧的雨水和五月>>>

薄菏正在放弃卑微 天空越来越灰
此刻我成为你的雨水 不停地下垂
风已被你燃尽 我深入你的体内
火苗成堆 五月行进在一场无比的拉网小调
燃烧 燃烧
燃得晨曦变出鸟叫 燃得树木被绿焚烧
五月
蓝色的灵魂已经出窍 这盛大的天空
这盛大的欢愉 我要把幼年的花朵和果实
在雨水里膨胀 变成你的眼神释放巨大的花香
我要在狂热的雨水里丈量五月 在树枝上
将你迎接 在血液的最深处
找到欣慰

青苹果的天空>>>

你一笑 淡黄色的纯朴爬上
我的瞳孔 你孕育的过程如同我幼年
一样香甜

现在青色裹紧你的内核 太阳光滑着
你羞涩的脸 我在你的石凳一坐就是十年
这些被雨水打湿的光阴 如同青春
在歌里找寻 我一直痴迷
把你的笑魇插枝 布满清晨
雄姿英发的鸟鸣

擅变的是你 口含夕阳
红彤彤地别离
我给以一千次的柔情
这些蜜蜂起飞的点 旋涡所有的面
流云织成的线 统统给你
而我
只在一幅画里 面壁

风起于青萍之末>>>

我在麦子的一端守望春天 风一直僵持着
地面 爬满各种贪念
忽然我吻出一个华丽的词汇 露珠纯净如水
你的笑容挑满双肩 一条蚯蚓捣毁我的思念
这样树荫来到我们中间 叶子把冬天涂抹成你的双眼
所有的点刹那连成燕子起飞的弧线 我坐在湖底
头顶着青萍之末 水草瞬间放弃哀怨
是笛声遮盖了山谷的白雪 风绚开一条
旧纱巾 音乐释放了一千朵玫瑰
美丽的脊梁凹凸不平 刺伤了正午
十二点
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PostPosted: 2010-06-02 18:24:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

来读烟雨, 润物无声
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PostPosted: 2010-06-04 03:30:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

柔软~既便有着张扬的内心~末了还归于柔软的释放~~
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PostPosted: 2010-06-05 18:27:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

句子打造得异彩纷呈,欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-06 06:16:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
来读烟雨, 润物无声


问候白水,谢谢理解.
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PostPosted: 2010-06-06 06:17:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
柔软~既便有着张扬的内心~末了还归于柔软的释放~~

问好红红,祝愿身体健康.
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