昕阳一片
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 Posted: 2010-05-29 21:58:45 Post subject: 七律•和唐伯虎落花诗之六 |
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七律•和唐伯虎落花诗之六
昕阳一片
帐冷芙蓉幻太真,蓬莱渺渺迥仙神。
潇湘馆里泪千滴,杨柳枝中花一春。
已去明君金谷笛,何来曼舞木香尘？
飞英常合红颜数,富贵浮云总弄人。
注:颔联拗救.
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 04:26:25 Post subject: |
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帐冷芙蓉幻太真,蓬莱渺渺迥仙神.
潇湘馆里泪千滴,杨柳枝中花一春.
不听明君金谷笛,休望曼舞木香尘.
飞英常合红颜数,富贵浮云总弄人.
飞英常合红颜数,富贵浮云总弄人. 欣赏！ |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 07:06:35 Post subject: |
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含情婉轉!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 10:00:08 Post subject: |
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| 飞英常合红颜数,富贵浮云总弄人. |
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昕阳一片
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 20:30:16 Post subject: |
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| 笑聊 wrote: |
帐冷芙蓉幻太真,蓬莱渺渺迥仙神.
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谢笑聊版主雅赏。问好！ |
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昕阳一片
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 20:31:06 Post subject: |
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谢白云版主鼓励。问好！ |
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