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春花七阕
李晶晶
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PostPosted: 2010-05-29 17:59:03    Post subject: 春花七阕 Reply with quote

春花七阕(平水韵)


文/北京李晶晶


卜算子·樱花

临月一枝斜,流水胭脂雪。剪剪风寒透暮云,衣冷香凝绝。
牧笛斗星微,数点樱红彻。驿路莺飞草转长,又至清明节。

浣溪沙·白玉兰

古刹阳关翠绝尘,风微凝黛玉冰身。半檐卧雪半阑云。
饮断群峰烟尽雨,剥开城北一枝春。为谁香冷为谁新。

减字木兰花·迎春花

轻寒乍雨,细蕊吐香凝玉露。枝影横垂,敛尽朝曦半壁辉。
春迟人渺,多少胭脂陪月老。风过云浮,空懒鹅黄一束幽。

昭君怨·落花

昨日山花尤灿,今夜春心已倦。含笑水悠悠,不离愁。
故地重游依旧,霜冷风微雨瘦。叶露湿衣裙,落花新。

减字木兰花·桃花

嫩红浅翠。一朵万枝谁独醉。斋静风凉。流水相依天地长。
与春无数。路转千回香不住。欲雨还晴。只望前尘笑泪盈。

巫山一段云·丁香

风暗亭台小,霞飞春染衣。隔墙旧梦水流晖,香谢半枝垂。
紫雾依栏尽,青纱掩蝶迟。浮窗帘半月痕微,偶有雨连丝。

菩萨蛮·荷花

修廊曲径天连碧。一枝出浴云烟湿。刹那月华凉,净磁腕底香。
清风弦乱绪。嫩绿濡微雨。静眼白萍新,莲芯香苦陈。



个人简介:李晶晶,在北京市大兴区仁和医院检验科工作,曾用名依竹听箫、微凉、归一。2006年开始写诗歌,并酷爱音乐,绘画,摄影。有诗作收录《中国诗歌》《诗潮》《黄河风诗刊》《嘉陵江诗刊》《大别山诗刊》《诗文杂志》《新诗潮》《核桃源》等。

诗观:诗歌的每一个表情都是生活。

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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-05-29 19:20:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎李晶晶朋友!

卜算子·樱花

临月一枝斜,流水胭脂雪。剪剪风寒透暮云,衣冷香凝绝。
牧笛斗星微,数点樱红彻。驿路莺飞草转长,又至清明节。

剪剪风寒透暮云:恰如剪刀裁剪出的春风,透着寒气,穿越了傍晚的云霞。剪剪,是剪刀裁剪出了风寒!意思不错。习惯上没有叠用。转,改 “渐 ”如何?
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PostPosted: 2010-05-29 19:45:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎晶晶朋友来到北美枫!

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=30207
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PostPosted: 2010-05-30 07:01:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

咏花七阕好篇章,诗画融和意犹长!
"临月一枝斜"、"细蕊吐香凝玉露".---好句!
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李晶晶
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PostPosted: 2010-06-17 00:12:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
欢迎李晶晶朋友!
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谢谢朋友的建议,我考虑
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李晶晶
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PostPosted: 2010-06-17 00:13:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
欢迎晶晶朋友来到北美枫!

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=30207


问好这位朋友
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李晶晶
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PostPosted: 2010-06-17 00:14:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
欢迎晶晶朋友来到北美枫!

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=30207


问好这位朋友
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李晶晶
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PostPosted: 2010-06-17 00:15:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
咏花七阕好篇章,诗画融和意犹长!
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谢谢白云赏读,多批问好
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-06-17 02:03:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新朋友!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-20 21:14:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好楼上的朋友
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老山
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PostPosted: 2010-06-21 03:44:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

好词,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-21 05:25:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏佳作篇篇。问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-06-29 07:25:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

老山 wrote:
好词,学习了。


谢谢老山欣赏,问好。
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