影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2010-05-30 02:40:10 Post subject: 七律。雨后池塘（新韵） |
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七律。雨后池塘（新韵）
风过池塘雨未干，夕阳独立影微澜。
天光浮叶荷包挺，水域飞霞蜻路宽。
远近翔腾云忘返，娉婷摇曳鲤留连。
一方真趣随人解，入化分毫显万端。
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 04:39:32 Post subject: |
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天光浮叶荷包挺，水域飞霞蜻路宽。
远近翔腾云忘返，娉婷摇曳鲤留连。
学习、欣赏！ |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 06:35:48 Post subject: |
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雨后池塘,一方真趣.欣赏!
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 07:11:56 Post subject: |
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一方真趣隨人解,入化分毫显万端 --- 佳句也! 是的,景由心生,趣自神來!
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-30 09:59:20 Post subject: |
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远近翔腾云忘返，娉婷摇曳鲤留连。
天上水中，气象万千。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-05-31 04:43:57 Post subject: |
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谢谢各位师友们评读
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