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人生長河(二)

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-05-25 17:02:02 Post subject: 人生長河(二)

.人生長河(二). 《調寄浪淘沙》欸乃聲中過萬山, 雲帆映日越波瀾. 江風白浪花千片, 化作豪情展笑顔. _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-05-25 19:36:03 Post subject:

波澜不惊,豪情万丈.诗如其人,欣赏白云! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2010-05-26 03:16:20 Post subject:

江風白浪花千片, 化作豪情展笑顔. 豪情万里激赏 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-05-26 04:10:36 Post subject:

读白云兄（人生长河二）有感并临屏赋绝句-赞豪情振衣一笑展豪情，映日云帆四海行。千浪翻腾闲事看，可燃枫叶染诗英。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-05-26 06:38:02 Post subject:

謝謝黄兄欣賞与勉励! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-05-26 06:39:04 Post subject:

謝影沉寒水点評! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-05-26 06:40:10 Post subject:

謝笑聊和诗! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-05-26 08:30:23 Post subject:

江風白浪花千片, 化作豪情展笑顔. _________________ 江风白浪，豪情笑颜。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-05-27 06:52:00 Post subject:

謝庆宏点評! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

冰清
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Posted: 2010-05-27 10:09:08 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

.人生長河(二).
《調寄浪淘沙》

欸乃聲中過萬山,
雲帆映日越波瀾.
江風白浪花千片,
化作豪情展笑顔.
_________________

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拜读！
起句突兀不凡（有如爆竹骤响），承句也很大气。但结句余味像有些不足。个见，望白云兄海涵。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-05-27 10:49:30 Post subject:

謝謝冰清暢怀指点.望多多指导.再謝! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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