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绝句-赞豪情

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-05-26 04:22:29 Post subject: 绝句-赞豪情

读白云兄（人生长河二）有感并临屏赋绝句-赞豪情振衣一笑展豪情，映日云帆四海行。千浪翻腾闲事看，可燃枫叶染诗英。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-05-26 06:35:49 Post subject:

千浪翻腾闲事看,信步优悠踱闲庭! 笑聊恬淡胸怀! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-05-27 03:24:43 Post subject:

谢谢白云兄雅评！

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Posted: 2010-05-27 03:26:52 Post subject:

转结语句比较牵强直言 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-05-27 03:48:49 Post subject:

[quote="影沉寒水"]转结语句比较牵强直言[/quote] 说对了。本想写律诗的，后来因为脑中杂事多而作罢。谢谢兄台直言！

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