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【夜飞鹊】 半世
犀利
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PostPosted: 2010-05-18 21:19:36    Post subject: 【夜飞鹊】 半世 Reply with quote

【夜飞鹊】 半世

天高水低处,看取鸿鸥。
徒教郁郁成囚。
多因病虐远书剑,可怜生若蜉蝣。
无端也来访,者阎罗殿上,遍砌髑髅。
题词在彼,应君邀、到此曾游。

哀莫大于心老,身老待何如?人岂无忧。
风雨奔波浮溺,生平夙愿,原也难酬?
倩谁煮酒,算英雄、不止曹刘!
向苍天争那,今生属我,半世觥筹。


【夜飞鹊】
始见《清真集》,入“道宫”。《梦窗词》集入“黄钟商”。一百七字,前片五平韵,后片四平韵。

【定格】

平平仄平仄,平仄平平(韵)。
平仄仄仄平平(韵)。
平平仄仄仄平仄,中平平仄平平(韵)。
平平仄平仄,仄平平平仄,仄仄平平(韵)。
平平仄仄,仄平平、中仄平平(韵)。

平仄仄平平仄,平仄仄平平,平仄平平(韵)。
平仄平平平仄,平平仄仄,平仄平平(韵)。
仄平仄仄,仄平平、仄仄平平(韵)。
仄平平平仄,平平仄仄,中仄平平(韵)。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-05-19 01:30:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

此生无悔,诗赋相酬.良友从游.
问好犀利!
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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犀利
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PostPosted: 2010-05-19 09:51:31    Post subject: 问候黄洋界先进! Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
此生无悔,诗赋相酬.良友从游.
问好犀利!



人生虽短,声气相投,得一而足,夫复何求?

问候黄洋界先进!
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2010-05-19 11:50:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

犀利兄宽心:阳光总在风雨后。

"遣兴莫过诗",为您的真诚、达观感动着。
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犀利
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PostPosted: 2010-05-19 11:54:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜见冰清先进! 谢垂顾!
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2010-05-21 15:14:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

今生鸿鸥,志在远游。煮酒英雄,何只曹刘。

犀利兄多保重!
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-05-22 04:08:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

生平夙愿,原也难酬? 煮酒英雄,何只曹刘。


犀利兄多保重!
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