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[原创]《我说出了疼痛的方位》

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Posted: 2010-05-16 15:55:03 Post subject: [原创]《我说出了疼痛的方位》

《我说出了疼痛的方位》文/大侠仙子一. 我羞于说出一些词语譬如爱，譬如爱你，譬如我爱你这些词语我应当听你来说终归，我不能确定这一切我羞于说出一些句子譬如诗，譬如诗人，譬如我是一个诗人这些句子应当听后人来说终归，我不能确定我的诗歌是否很快就会在红尘里烟灭二. 我不能确定春天的月季是不是母亲的经血我不能确定夏日的杜鹃是不是鸟儿在咯血我不能确定秋天的红叶是不是夏日厮杀的结果冬天的雪花是不是你高高挂起的冷漠我的诗歌穿越四季早已厌倦了那些风花雪月三. 算计爱情也许有点卑劣至于诗歌，为了养大舌头一直保持沉默白云掉进水里会有什么结果这个春季，我目睹花开花谢一些飞鸟在我身体里不停地穿梭忧伤纷纷扬扬落地成殇我怀抱被花鸟啄蚀过的骨胳却发现他们成了一具空壳四. 爱情是人生的偏头疼如果不是那些吗啡我可能早已死于非命一个人死了也许能成就一首诗一首诗到死也不能成就一个人孔雀开屏成了诗人们的生活绕过一地的浮夸和虚脱诗歌究竟还剩下什么我说出了疼痛的方位却无法在孤独里得到解脱 2010.5.16

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Posted: 2010-05-16 15:56:39 Post subject:

花是自拍的，请行家指点！

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Posted: 2010-05-16 16:45:25 Post subject:

很好看的花，很好看的诗。喜欢你对诗歌的理解。努力去写有思想性的诗歌。 _________________ 尘世中的一颗微粒

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Posted: 2010-05-16 18:01:38 Post subject:

诗歌究竟还剩下什么我说出了疼痛的方位却无法在孤独里得到解脱 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

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Posted: 2010-05-16 18:15:01 Post subject:

红尘里烟灭的是那曾经的火花写下去，任思绪自由的飞

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Posted: 2010-05-17 01:50:53 Post subject:

泪眼问花花不语~~乱红飞过秋千去~~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-05-17 06:22:21 Post subject:

天端 wrote:

很好看的花，很好看的诗。
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谢谢，共勉！

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Posted: 2010-05-17 07:53:05 Post subject:

鼓掌！ _________________ 得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！

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Posted: 2010-05-17 17:26:03 Post subject:

子在川上曰 wrote:

诗歌究竟还剩下什么
我说出了疼痛的方位
却无法在孤独里得到解脱

问好川先生

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Posted: 2010-05-17 17:26:56 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

红尘里烟灭的是那曾经的火花 Razz

写下去，任思绪自由的飞

谢谢鼓励！感动！

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Posted: 2010-05-17 17:28:07 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

泪眼问花花不语~~乱红飞过秋千去~~~

谢谢红，问好！

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Posted: 2010-05-17 17:30:08 Post subject:

晴天雨天 wrote:

鼓掌！

谢谢，也为你鼓掌！

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Posted: 2010-05-21 04:46:12 Post subject:

很好看的花，很好看的诗 _________________ 陕西姜华

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Posted: 2010-05-26 04:08:26 Post subject:

江南雨 wrote:

很好看的花，很好看的诗

谢谢江南雨，问好！

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