黄洋界
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 Posted: 2010-05-14 18:41:15 Post subject: 五绝 初夏偶成 |
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五绝 初夏偶成
嘉陵江水碧,
倚岸鹭斜飞,
借问垂纶者,
盆中鲫鱼肥?
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-05-15 03:43:14 Post subject: |
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倚岸鹭斜飞,
倚岸意思上似有不妥
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-05-15 05:00:56 Post subject: |
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| 好诗！问好黄老师！ |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2010-05-15 06:22:42 Post subject: |
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| 影沉寒水 wrote: |
倚岸鹭斜飞,
倚岸意思上似有不妥 |
寒水兄:因俯瞰远望,故有此视觉感受,谢谢推敲.
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2010-05-15 06:26:46 Post subject: |
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谢笑聊兄评阅.
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-05-15 08:56:35 Post subject: |
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四川鲫鱼，味美汤鲜，令人回味无穷啊！黄老师诗作很有味道。
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七绝 再和自在飞《钓叟》（旧作）
清心作饵月为钩，垂钓江河万古流。
将相君王如过鲫，品其滋味在心头。 |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2010-05-15 15:47:09 Post subject: |
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谢庆宏和诗,<钓叟>是钓古钩沉的好诗.
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