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五律立夏雨

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Posted: 2010-05-10 16:53:20 Post subject: 五律立夏雨

入夏三更雨，留春一段香。红衰凝泪渍，绿盛透锋芒。隔叶莺声好，笼阶竹影凉。穿庭看乳燕，两两学飞忙。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2010-05-10 17:59:51 Post subject:

学习好律，欣赏：红衰凝泪渍，绿盛透锋芒。隔叶莺声好，笼阶竹影凉。

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Posted: 2010-05-11 06:59:05 Post subject:

是啊!5月5号已是"立夏"节令了. 隔叶莺声好,笼阶竹影凉 --- 好句! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-05-11 07:05:06 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

学习好律，欣赏：红衰凝泪渍，绿盛透锋芒。隔叶莺声好，笼阶竹影凉。

谢谢笑聊兄欣赏。拙作诗意淡薄，见笑了。
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学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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