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夕阳.明月

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Posted: 2010-05-11 06:12:36 Post subject: 夕阳.明月

夕阳.明月文/北城午后，一杯茶陪几张报纸闲聊期待晚霞吐出最后一缕灿烂叩响下班的铃声一路轻扬敲开挥洒酒香的门与久违的温馨装个满怀一杯酒煮的夕阳融化了好多历史熟睡的思绪随孤独的大雁终于找到了春天好想陪你一起去山巅经历一场风雨一缕晚风路过飞起一脚把孤寂的日子踢远迎风而来双手接住的是一轮皎洁的明月 2010.5.11 北城通联：guohaidf@163.com _________________ 联通：guohaodf@163.com 博客：北城工作室

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Posted: 2010-05-11 06:13:25 Post subject:

欢迎老师指导谢谢 _________________ 联通：guohaodf@163.com 博客：北城工作室

白水
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Posted: 2010-05-11 16:48:54 Post subject:

欣赏你的文笔。盼多与其他诗友交流，互动。

子在川上曰
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Posted: 2010-05-11 17:15:04 Post subject:

一缕晚风路过飞起一脚把孤寂的日子踢远迎风而来双手接住的是一轮皎洁的明月 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

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Posted: 2010-05-12 06:33:33 Post subject:

子在川上曰 wrote:

一缕晚风路过
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谢谢老师指导，谢谢。
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Posted: 2010-05-12 06:34:34 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

欣赏你的文笔。
盼多与其他诗友交流，互动。

谢谢老师指导谢谢。
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大侠仙子
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Posted: 2010-05-12 18:23:37 Post subject:

欣赏，不错。

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Posted: 2010-05-13 08:21:43 Post subject:

大侠仙子 wrote:

欣赏，不错。

谢谢您的光临
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安红红
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Posted: 2010-05-17 02:20:27 Post subject:

孤寂是复制和粘贴循环不止~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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