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又见炊烟【组诗】
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PostPosted: 2009-09-22 20:41:19    Post subject: 又见炊烟【组诗】 Reply with quote

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心底的那一声声呼唤

让久别的鸿雁回归故乡

那里该是衰草瑟瑟秋风萧萧的时节

肥硕的牛羊慵懒地放牧旧梦

渐瘦的小河撑起澎湃的童话

一段久违的爱恋

在草原深处痴痴的守望

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蓝天俯下身来亲吻安逸的牧场

白云久久徘徊在那最后一片绿洲

逝去的储存在斑驳的记忆里

留下的在角落里落满灰尘

只有久违的炊烟再起

才能打开尘封的温馨

找回丢失的岁月

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又见炊烟

饮一壶老酒

握紧长长的套马竿

套住羞红的夕阳

走进两个人的梦乡

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绵长的相思

挂在飘摇的枝头

质朴的乡情如弥散的炊烟

哭红的泪眼忧伤了明月

偎依在肩头

了却多年的幽怨

在草原

一缕炊烟延续着千年的传奇

一段爱恋放牧你到天涯

2009.9.23于科尔沁草原 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-09-23 01:20:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

一段久违的爱恋

在草原深处痴痴的守望
。。。深情的描述。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-10 16:59:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

学谢谢赵老师。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-10 19:24:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

草原的炊烟,比尘世的炊烟更能带来希望与诗情.
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PostPosted: 2010-05-11 06:11:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟啸徐行 wrote:
草原的炊烟,比尘世的炊烟更能带来希望与诗情.
谢谢您的指导。
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