笑聊
探花
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 Posted: 2010-05-02 05:27:01 Post subject: 越调天净沙-依稀旧事 |
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越调天净沙-依稀旧事和白云兄
依稀往日春风，
小桥流水淙淙。
紫燕双双媚宠。
谁家争诵：
牡丹亭里情衷！ |
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2010-05-02 07:28:27 Post subject: |
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笑聊兄,此曲名是否《天净沙》?
与笑聊兄唱和一首:
. . . 慢步雨中. . .
《越调、天净沙》
丝丝雨戏春风 ，
輕輕撫草葱茏 。
慢步芳郊抒衷 ！
花开情纵 ，
心中春色融融 ！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-05-02 14:53:19 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢白云兄指正！谢谢白云兄和曲！ |
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影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
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| Posted: 2010-05-03 04:46:46 Post subject: |
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匆匆春又归去
问好两位斑斑
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-05-04 04:36:29 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢寒水兄并问好！ |
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白云闲人
探花
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| Posted: 2010-05-04 06:59:58 Post subject: |
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笑聊兄,依稀往事中"牡丹亭情衷"! 风流浪漫!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2010-05-05 12:22:01 Post subject: |
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问好！依韵填写《越调-天净沙-答白云兄》
文/笑聊
那年早吹和风。
艳阳才展情浓。
折柳依依誓永。
柔情万种，
潺潺流水匆匆。 |
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