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越调天净沙-依稀旧事
笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-05-02 05:27:01    Post subject: 越调天净沙-依稀旧事 Reply with quote

越调天净沙-依稀旧事和白云兄

依稀往日春风,
小桥流水淙淙。
紫燕双双媚宠。
谁家争诵:
牡丹亭里情衷!
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PostPosted: 2010-05-02 07:28:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄,此曲名是否《天净沙》?
与笑聊兄唱和一首:

. . . 慢步雨中. . .
《越调、天净沙》
丝丝雨戏春风 ,
輕輕撫草葱茏 。
慢步芳郊抒衷 !
花开情纵 ,
心中春色融融 !
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-05-02 14:53:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白云兄指正!谢谢白云兄和曲!
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PostPosted: 2010-05-03 04:46:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

匆匆春又归去

问好两位斑斑
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PostPosted: 2010-05-04 04:36:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢寒水兄并问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-05-04 06:59:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄,依稀往事中"牡丹亭情衷"! 风流浪漫!
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PostPosted: 2010-05-05 12:22:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!依韵填写《越调-天净沙-答白云兄》

文/笑聊

那年早吹和风。

艳阳才展情浓。

折柳依依誓永。

柔情万种,

潺潺流水匆匆。
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