永春 童生
Joined: 17 Mar 2007 Posts: 15
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Posted: 2007-03-21 11:36:25 Post subject: 七绝?春雪 |
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序:早下的雪已溶化,昨夜突下暴雪,感赋。
昨宵暴雪飘天晓,一夜人间碧绿消。
已化冰湖呈青地,银杉皎皎又着乔。 |
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和平岛 举人

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 1277 Location: Victoria, Canada 和平岛Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-21 17:33:06 Post subject: |
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一夜人间碧绿消
好句 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-21 20:18:18 Post subject: |
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身临其境感觉更亲切些  |
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永春 童生
Joined: 17 Mar 2007 Posts: 15
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Posted: 2007-03-22 06:08:43 Post subject: 答谢 |
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和平岛先生:
谢谢!请斧正.3.22 |
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永春 童生
Joined: 17 Mar 2007 Posts: 15
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Posted: 2007-03-22 06:14:16 Post subject: |
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白水小姐:
谢谢鼓励.请多指教.3.22 |
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