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七绝•春雪
永春
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 11:36:25    Post subject: 七绝?春雪 Reply with quote

序:早下的雪已溶化,昨夜突下暴雪,感赋。

昨宵暴雪飘天晓,一夜人间碧绿消。
已化冰湖呈青地,银杉皎皎又着乔。
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 17:33:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

一夜人间碧绿消

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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 20:18:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

身临其境感觉更亲切些 Very Happy
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永春
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 06:08:43    Post subject: 答谢 Reply with quote

和平岛先生:
谢谢!请斧正.3.22
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永春
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 06:14:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水小姐:
谢谢鼓励.请多指教.3.22
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