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[原创]《碎片》(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2010-04-28 14:31:12    Post subject: [原创]《碎片》(外一首) Reply with quote


《碎片》

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天空,碎了
这么多宇宙的碎片
如何拼捡
血,在脚下漫延
这个春天种下这么多苦难
如何赶在冬天到来之前
缝补所有的裂痕
那是地球的出口么
我只想向天空逃离
去触摸一下太阳有没有发炎
银河里我看到许多星星顺从了光的意愿
如果,那些闪电只是上天的惊叹
如果,那些雷鸣只是大自然的呜咽
如果,天空只是一块巨大的玻璃
那么地球,难道是人类手里的一个弹丸
2010.4.28



《生命线》

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起笔很浅
却有无数个点驻足在我的生命线
转过头,阴霾 就在眼前
许多人死了
这些年我一个人一直向前
我儿时的一个玩伴
我中学时的好友
我的两个表兄,其实他们都还年轻
我的闺密跌入闹市里的一个湖里
我的朋友住进医院二十天就去了殡仪馆
我父辈的那些亲人相继离去
地震,许多人今生还来不及打个照面
我最终成为这个世上的孤雁
活着是一种罪过我却无法割舍
沿着这条生命线
越走越黑暗越走越孤单
许多悲伤像一缕饮烟渐行渐远
疼痛游走在笔尖
我写了许多诗爱着许多人
却在所有的笔画里找不到自己
我是顺着这条路来的么
我该如何走下去
手里的这支笔停下来就是一个坟茔
插上去就是我的墓碑
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PostPosted: 2010-04-28 17:27:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

同样写地震,但比较内涵与蕴藉,欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-28 18:21:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

构思别致的两首!!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-29 18:22:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟啸徐行 wrote:
同样写地震,但比较内涵与蕴藉,欣赏!

谢谢欣赏!问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-29 18:23:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
构思别致的两首!!

谢谢关注,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-29 18:32:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

大侠仙子,有点仙风道骨啊!大作拜读!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-29 20:46:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

吴景慧 wrote:
大侠仙子,有点仙风道骨啊!大作拜读!

“诗是分行的文字,但不是所有分行的文字都是诗。写完了一首诗之后,自己再读一读,看看能不能先感动了你自己。”——说得好,自省中。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-29 22:19:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

如果,那些闪电只是上天的惊叹
如果,那些雷鸣只是大自然的呜咽
如果,天空只是一块巨大的玻璃
那么地球,难道是人类手里的一个弹丸
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PostPosted: 2010-04-30 05:47:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

子在川上曰 wrote:
如果,那些闪电只是上天的惊叹
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谢谢来品,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-30 06:20:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

姐不许说我。

《碎片》

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碎了
这么多宇宙碎片
如何拼捡

血,在脚下漫延
这个苦难
如何赶在冬天
缝补,地球的可怜

我只想逃离
去触摸太阳
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PostPosted: 2010-04-30 12:58:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

思绪开阔
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PostPosted: 2010-05-04 02:55:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

晴天雨天 wrote:
姐不许说我。
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很好,比姐写得棒!精耕细作。
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PostPosted: 2010-05-04 02:56:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
思绪开阔

谢谢白水关注!向您学习。
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