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西江月.早行

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Posted: 2010-04-23 04:39:32 Post subject: 西江月.早行

西江月早行車上人人讓座，座中個個動容。少兒臉上蕩春風，綻放鳧光蝶影。亮徹鐘山乳霧，映紅煙水石城。雨花博愛育新晴，燕舞鶯歌柳寵。 [依中华新韵] ［2010年4月23日星期五于莫愁湖畔］ _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2010-04-23 06:30:25 Post subject:

社会需要提倡新风，刻不容缓！问好君山兄！

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Posted: 2010-04-23 07:15:38 Post subject:

鐘山、石城、雨花台,燕舞、莺歌、柳兒寵,君山兄詞情画意! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-04-23 20:05:19 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

社会需要提倡新风，刻不容缓！

问好君山兄！

尊老爱幼，车上让座，南京确实做得不错。那天就有四人给我让座，不能不让人感动！
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学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2010-04-23 20:07:15 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

鐘山、石城、雨花台,燕舞、莺歌、柳兒寵,君山兄詞情画意!

谢谢白兄谪仙。我只是想学学，定虱不怎么好，请您多帮助我。
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学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2010-04-24 06:54:05 Post subject:

西江月早行車上人人讓座，座中個個動容。少兒臉上蕩春風，綻放鳧光蝶影。亮徹鐘山乳霧，映紅煙水石城。雨花博愛育新晴，燕舞鶯歌柳寵。欣赏好词，问候君山楚女诗友。

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Posted: 2010-04-24 08:33:15 Post subject:

君山兄,客气了! 诗詞創作各有风格,互相多交流,百花齐争妍! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-05-01 03:55:26 Post subject:

宁家珍 wrote:

西江月
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家珍兄的诗作神形俱备，我是喜欢。
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学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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