影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2010-04-22 05:57:50 Post subject: 七律。逢友怀乡 |
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七律。逢友怀乡
谁点心香翻旧囊，湖山几度换春裳。
粉桃初放遇嘉友，翠李新酸念故乡。
得报家人多祝福，筹思来日少风霜。
有知更是闽江水，流荡清宵慰远长。
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-04-22 08:46:53 Post subject: |
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一首怀乡曲,字字透情长!
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宁家珍
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| Posted: 2010-04-23 01:47:58 Post subject: |
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| 问候寒水诗友。。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-04-23 04:31:56 Post subject: |
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问好诗长晚上好
谢阅
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昕阳一片
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| Posted: 2010-04-23 06:07:26 Post subject: |
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| 再赏佳作。问好！ |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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| Posted: 2010-04-23 06:52:19 Post subject: |
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起句开阔有力，颈联点明遇友时间，颌联承接有序，结尾似水流长。
寒水兄这首七律很得章法。欣赏学习了。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2010-04-24 05:49:11 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑版评读
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