影沉寒水 举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-11 05:20:47 Post subject: 七律。无意苦望春 |
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七律。无意苦望春(新韵)
往事浮尘多辗转,风来回首净衣身。
已知清静解心病,不忘迷顽误世人。
变在虚实知辨假,缘随聚散梦还真。
中藏勉志连天远,无意寻花苦望春。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-11 08:21:04 Post subject: |
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缘隨聚散梦还真.无意寻花苦望春.---生活隨缘始心开! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-11 23:26:42 Post subject: |
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这首律诗满蕴哲理,值得探索学习!问好! |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-12 00:48:52 Post subject: |
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"无意寻花",勉志还真.问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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影沉寒水 举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-04-12 05:18:49 Post subject: |
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谢谢师友们来评读 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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