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江城子•庚寅清明祭扫祖母墓

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Posted: 2010-04-08 20:12:48 Post subject: 江城子•庚寅清明祭扫祖母墓

江城子•庚寅清明祭扫祖母墓香烟绕树蝶纷纷。戚苍雾，悴红尘。云动青衫，片片是泪痕。数遍千山情未杳，落日里，吟声轻。光腚难忆恸黄昏。母赴冥，祖断魂。羸体心碎，风雨护孤孙。怎得慈颜进丝孝，明月夜，梦深深。

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Posted: 2010-04-08 21:34:50 Post subject:

传统美德。

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Posted: 2010-04-09 01:48:44 Post subject:

声声动情，催人泪下：怎得慈颜进丝孝，明月夜，梦深深。问好米兄！

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Posted: 2010-04-09 05:36:19 Post subject:

谢谢庆宏兄雅评！

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Posted: 2010-04-09 05:37:48 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊兄雅评，笑聊兄谬赞了！

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Posted: 2010-04-09 07:47:27 Post subject:

光腚难忆恸黄昏。母赴冥，祖断魂。羸体心碎，风雨护孤孙。一路走来成长中几多追忆 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-04-09 10:39:34 Post subject:

"落日里,吟声轻.明月夜,梦深深." 运刚笔墨饱含深情! "风雨护孤孫"读來令人感慨万千! 运刚詞情深深! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-04-11 04:26:14 Post subject:

谢谢寒水兄阅读；谢谢白云兄雅评！问好，二兄！

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Posted: 2010-04-12 01:21:58 Post subject:

调寄<江城子>,倾诉祖孙情.问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-04-12 05:33:20 Post subject:

情真切，词华丽。大手笔就是不一般，值得一学。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2010-04-20 05:53:47 Post subject:

谢谢黄先生、君山先生雅评！

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