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泉边梳妆的少女
四一果
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 03:34:18    Post subject: 泉边梳妆的少女 Reply with quote
泉边梳妆的少女

泉边梳妆的少女
把一场春雨梳成翅膀
鸣唱的水鸟已经上岸
涛声原有的暖巢里
丢下一只船工号子

泉边梳妆的少女
水延长了黑发延长了时间
把激活的水梳成腰鼓
爱情展开 香气布下长路
它用鳍语 你用
什么辨别风向

泉边梳妆的少女
把一只木梳梳成少年郎
一把没有梳理的日子
飞向河西 飞向河东
安静地落入一支民歌
与你相伴相依
与水相生 相恋
纷纷抵达鲤鱼红红的小嘴
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-04-08 18:40:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
让我想起“亚麻色头发的少女”
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四一果
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PostPosted: 2010-04-10 22:09:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
让我想起“亚麻色头发的少女”


非常谢谢白水“亚麻色头发的少女”
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2010-04-12 02:57:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
很美的诗歌。欣赏！
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四一果
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PostPosted: 2010-04-16 20:16:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
韩少君 wrote:
很美的诗歌。欣赏！



我唯有谢谢了，请韩老师多指教哈
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