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春色满园
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PostPosted: 2010-04-02 17:36:52    Post subject: 春色满园 Reply with quote

* 春 色 满 园 *
< 调寄一七令 >

看!
春色,
满园.
歌舞漫,
百花鲜.
天南地北,
荟萃同贤.
赞骚人墨客,
赏妙品連篇.
婉韵娓音荡漾,
吟诗作对悠然.
旧雨新知同揮洒,
你唱我和乐华年!
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昕阳一片
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PostPosted: 2010-04-02 18:19:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

春意盎然好赋诗!欣赏。问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-02 18:49:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝昕阳一片的欣赏与雅评!
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宁家珍
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PostPosted: 2010-04-02 19:46:56    Post subject: To 白云闲人先生 Reply with quote

看!
春色, 满园.
歌舞漫, 百花鲜.
天南地北, 荟萃同贤.
赞骚人墨客, 赏妙品連篇.
婉韵娓音荡漾, 吟诗作对悠然.
旧雨新知同揮洒, 你唱我和乐华年!

欣赏好令,问候白云先生。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 05:21:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白云兄!一七令很特别的词,欣赏:赞骚人墨客, 赏妙品連篇. 旧雨新知同揮洒, 你唱我和乐华年!
可惜没有词谱,不然,与兄当浮大白,击节而歌!
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影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 05:33:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

春色满园关不住

为有君诗送将来


遥问好
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 05:56:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗成宝塔,春色满园。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 10:16:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝宁家珍欣赏!
问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 10:37:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

附上白居易詞一首,供欣赏:

诗.
绮美,
瑰奇.
明月夜,
落花時.
能助欢笑,
亦伤别离.
调清金石怨,
吟苦鬼神悲.
天下只应我爱,
世間唯有君知.
自從都尉别苏句,
便到司空送白辞.
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 10:54:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝影沉寒水赏评!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-03 10:56:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝庆宏雅评!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-04 01:54:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白云兄!临屏依兄韵唱和并一醉:

看!
北美,枫园。
花卉俏,绿新鲜。
阳光普照,聚友集贤。
茗香飘四海,文赋曲连篇。
君唱黄钟大吕,朋吟辞赋天然。
艳阳春风柳步舞,共创北美枫盛年!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-04 05:50:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

春色满园一七令
妙品連篇乐华年
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PostPosted: 2010-04-04 09:20:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊兄唱和!
笑聊兄诗情泉湧!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-04 09:22:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝sliu6的雅评!
問好!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-05 03:12:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="白云闲人"]謝謝笑聊兄唱和!
笑聊兄诗情泉湧![/quote]
谢谢白云兄! Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2010-04-05 09:15:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄盛情!
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