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七律。清明忆梦
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PostPosted: 2010-04-05 04:47:41    Post subject: 七律。清明忆梦 Reply with quote

七律。清明忆梦
霁雨轻寒夜一杯,人间重聚梦中来
无边往事出新月,几度清明击恸怀
如水常开思念径,入春再祭柏陵台
可斟酸酒说心事,烛泪无声天地徊
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PostPosted: 2010-04-05 09:12:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

岁月烟飞又清明,一杯浊酒梦魂縈.无边思念昔重影,奉诗句句孝心诚.
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PostPosted: 2010-04-06 04:22:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

可斟酸酒说心事,烛泪无声天地徊
尾联读来,抑郁沉闷。回应了清明忆梦!
问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-06 07:35:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白云版和笑聊

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PostPosted: 2010-04-06 10:47:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

清明忆故旧,泪洒伤感酒。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-07 04:30:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
清明忆故旧,泪洒伤感酒。
清明忆梦
霁雨轻寒夜一杯,人间重聚梦中来
无边往事出新月,几度清明击恸怀
如水常开思念径,入春再祭柏陵台
可斟酸酒说心事,烛泪无声天地徊
读先生诗不由怀人伤感落泪涟涟。欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-07 05:23:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

米运刚 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
清明忆故旧,泪洒伤感酒。
清明忆梦
霁雨轻寒夜一杯,人间重聚梦中来
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