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因为山的缘故

风之林
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Posted: 2010-04-03 02:02:56 Post subject: 因为山的缘故

因为山的缘故每次去看你要走很远很远的路因为山的缘故其实，你并不很远只要翻越那一山巍峨你的容颜便如莲花开在山后可我就喜欢远着的感觉远得握不住你的心情，握不住你的悲喜就象当年握不住时光扔出去后青涩的回音 …… 隔山不见，空闻水响月色也倾盆，我的身体里有澎湃的潮汐踩着你叮咚的梵音，时消时涨即使桃花不开春风不来看你的心情依旧会三月满怀遥远是一件太美好的事每当我想起那些走过的山水灯火便会在心中一点点燃起来就因为——山的缘故风之林 2010/04/02

四一果
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Posted: 2010-04-03 03:08:32 Post subject:

距离产生美，来读。

风之林
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Posted: 2010-04-05 08:53:38 Post subject:

问好四一果！谢谢你的精粹点评。祝好！

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