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七律-赞不老童心和白云兄《春天》

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Posted: 2010-04-01 06:15:41 Post subject: 七律-赞不老童心和白云兄《春天》

文/笑聊临屏赋律-赞不老童心和白云兄《春天》不老童心竟入怀，春光大好赋诗来。儿歌一曲甜如蜜，笑语连天唱和才。追逐蝶蜂花弄影，闲吟老朽步亭台。白云点缀蓝天净，直把胸扉对外开。附白云兄原玉： * 春天 * 啊! 來吧,親爱的春天. 您给树林穿上绿衣. 让鴨子在河边嬉戏. 我在树下听小鸟歌唱. 草地上开心追逐, 笑声响四方! 來吧,親爱的春天, 让我們一同去游玩!

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Posted: 2010-04-01 10:10:35 Post subject:

謝謝笑聊兄好诗! 依韵和一首<渔歌子> 不老童心春满怀 < 调寄渔歌子 > 旖旎春光湧入怀, 不老童心笑颜开. 寻自乐, 趣中來, 吟诗作曲度詞牌. _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-04-01 10:20:14 Post subject:

欢乐唱和，琴瑟佳音。

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Posted: 2010-04-02 04:47:24 Post subject:

不老童心竟入怀，春光大好赋诗来。祝大家幸福快乐 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-04-02 08:54:15 Post subject:

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Posted: 2010-04-02 09:27:02 Post subject:

[quote="白云闲人"]謝謝笑聊兄好诗! ...[/quote] 谢谢白云兄好词相和！

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Posted: 2010-04-02 09:28:38 Post subject:

[quote="qinghongh"]欢乐唱和，琴瑟佳音。[/quote] 感谢庆宏兄雅评！

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Posted: 2010-04-02 09:30:54 Post subject:

[quote="影沉寒水"]不老童心竟入怀，春光大好赋诗来。祝大家幸福快乐[/quote] 谢谢寒水提读、春祝！问好！

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Posted: 2010-04-02 11:00:13 Post subject:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=29070 问好笑聊

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Posted: 2010-04-02 16:53:06 Post subject:

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=29070 问好笑聊 [/quote] 问好白水！谢谢！营造良好氛围，共创北美新枫！

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Posted: 2010-04-02 18:29:26 Post subject:

美丽的春天，欢快的春天。欣赏唱和佳作。问好！

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Posted: 2010-04-03 05:06:40 Post subject:

[quote="白云闲人"]謝謝笑聊兄好诗! ...[/quote] 依韵填词《忆江南-春》和白云兄<渔歌子>：春满苑，绿柳荡虚怀。追逐彩蜂花弄影，从风白鹭旋楼台。水榭叠云开。

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Posted: 2010-04-04 04:42:39 Post subject:

[quote="昕阳一片"]美丽的春天，欢快的春天。欣赏唱和佳作。问好！[/quote] 谢谢昕阳一片兄雅评！诗握问好！

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Posted: 2010-04-04 09:13:56 Post subject:

謝謝笑聊兄<忆江南>和詞! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-04-05 03:08:00 Post subject:

从/天空飘来/一朵/五彩的云，是/仙女撒向/人间的春光。、、、再读白云兄《春天》，情不自禁哼起早年写着玩的歌。同白云兄一样，不会把谱打出来。汗颜！

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Posted: 2010-04-05 09:19:56 Post subject:

婉雅歌声,悠扬清听! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-04-05 22:03:48 Post subject:

谢谢白云兄的雅评！顺问好！

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Posted: 2010-04-07 04:30:31 Post subject:

祝大家幸福快乐。

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Posted: 2010-04-07 04:40:20 Post subject:

笑聊兄新诗旧词都如此美好，欣赏！

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Posted: 2010-04-07 06:03:04 Post subject:

[quote="周志桥"]祝大家幸福快乐。[/quote] 谢谢志桥诗友的祝福！期望诗友一起欢乐！

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