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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 19:47:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

星星 wrote:

悄悄地问一句:想不想吃粉丝? noodles


搬条板凳来
一块吃

noodles cheers
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 19:56:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

嗯!然后手扬花花,扭扭PP,我要先喊“烈总,加油!枫华,天下一家,加油!” lover lover drum drum ,然后你要喊什么啊?
hepingdao wrote:
星星 wrote:

悄悄地问一句:想不想吃粉丝? noodles


搬条板凳来
一块吃

noodles cheers
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 20:01:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛主有所不知。这粉丝有好几种:
凉风嗖嗖无人经,这是冷艳冷眼的粉丝;
情意绵绵秋水亭。这是无声无息的粉丝;
独羡高悬明镜月,这是若即若离的粉丝;
夜半常随痴人行。这是如影如随的粉丝。

岛主想亲近哪一种?
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躺汉?躺在深山望日月,与世无争逍遥汉;
淌汗?淌出阴暗,流出虚汗;
糖含?含在嘴里弄柔情,甜进心扉馨肝胆;
棠菡?孤芳自赏,孤影留恋;
千万别当我是唐汉,羞对唐,愧为汉。梦回唐汉,何时再现?
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 20:03:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松兄,我以一酒后字画回敬你,立个酒约,他日你我不醉不休!(那次我喝的是茅台,我的最爱)


酒后醉书图

吾生性奔放,自幼好酒,每每醉时,指点江山,其乐无穷。年已不惑,尝遍人世起伏,不再梦想现实。纵然千古愁,万世忧,不及酒后一醉书,忘却风花雪夜,沧海桑田,今生唯我自伴!

水墨纸本.镜片
于丙戌年八月五日以自叹江东烈日
印/烈日之巅(朱),花月渔隐(白)
71 X 40cm 约 2.56平方尺

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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 20:14:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

tanghan wrote:
岛主有所不知。这粉丝有好几种:
凉风嗖嗖无人经,这是冷艳冷眼的粉丝;
情意绵绵秋水亭。这是无声无息的粉丝;
独羡高悬明镜月,这是若即若离的粉丝;
夜半常随痴人行。这是如影如随的粉丝。

岛主想亲近哪一种?


俺是个俗人
都想试一试
smiling rose let's dance umbrella love you woaaaaaa
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 20:17:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

好呀!来calgary,先领你到凉风嗖嗖无人经,如果没冻着,再领你到情意绵绵秋水亭。看你没什末经验,秋水亭一时半会是出不来了。
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躺汉?躺在深山望日月,与世无争逍遥汉;
淌汗?淌出阴暗,流出虚汗;
糖含?含在嘴里弄柔情,甜进心扉馨肝胆;
棠菡?孤芳自赏,孤影留恋;
千万别当我是唐汉,羞对唐,愧为汉。梦回唐汉,何时再现?
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 20:31:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

tanghan wrote:
好呀!来calgary,先领你到凉风嗖嗖无人经,如果没冻着,再领你到情意绵绵秋水亭。看你没什末经验,秋水亭一时半会是出不来了。


我最有耐心

shining teeth broke teeth cup of wine
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 20:31:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

烈日之巅 wrote:
晓松兄,我以一酒后字画回敬你,立个酒约,他日你我不醉不休!(那次我喝的是茅台,我的最爱)


酒后醉书图

吾生性奔放,自幼好酒,每每醉时,指点江山,其乐无穷。年已不惑,尝遍人世起伏,不再梦想现实。纵然千古愁,万世忧,不及酒后一醉书,忘却风花雪夜,沧海桑田,今生唯我自伴!

水墨纸本.镜片
于丙戌年八月五日以自叹江东烈日
印/烈日之巅(朱),花月渔隐(白)
71 X 40cm 约 2.56平方尺




自古诗人多酒狂,
李白斗酒赋诗章。
明朝把盏酬宾客,
今晚先将画收藏。
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 21:01:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝. 依晓松兄下平七阳韵和诗. 酒约

双枫汇聚墨书香
烈日相逢众列强
不打不知缘份起
来年醉倒晓松郎 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 21:42:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

两位擂主辛苦了. 拭目以待.
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 22:52:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:

问好烈日之巅和坛主司马先生
感谢枫华论坛的所有朋友!


承蒙坛主问候!

迟来了,以往昔拙书拜坛谢罪,望海涵。

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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 00:41:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

太精彩了!我也给各位加油来了!
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 00:57:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

烈日之巅 wrote:
晓松兄,我以一酒后字画回敬你,立个酒约,他日你我不醉不休!(那次我喝的是茅台,我的最爱)


酒后醉书图

吾生性奔放,自幼好酒,每每醉时,指点江山,其乐无穷。年已不惑,尝遍人世起伏,不再梦想现实。纵然千古愁,万世忧,不及酒后一醉书,忘却风花雪夜,沧海桑田,今生唯我自伴!

水墨纸本.镜片
于丙戌年八月五日以自叹江东烈日
印/烈日之巅(朱),花月渔隐(白)
71 X 40cm 约 2.56平方尺



很有创意,好似镜中镜延绵不断。诗词简洁明了,却极具个性,让人不由得产生共鸣,混沌之中却又潇洒豪放,颓废之中显现峥峥傲骨。实在是好!
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 02:39:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿桑 wrote:
太精彩了!我也给各位加油来了!


问好阿桑兄!

啦啦队长来啦
Very Happy

我们两个兄弟论坛
双枫携手并肩前进!
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 05:31:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

凤舞九天 wrote:
要想真正打败听云和弹剑等人,可得要加把劲呀! Very Happy


凤舞好眼力. 此次打擂评分得名为虚, 切磋技艺为实. 听云, 弹剑的确高手, 还盼楼主百忙之中将这两位诗词作作点评, 也可让我们加深体会.

我个人总以为, 真正的好诗词, 除去尊格律词谱WHATEVER这些写作技巧之必须, 更重要的在于其内涵,意境. 仅仅文字美, 景色美是不够的,而应寓情于景, 让景去传递人性深层的感受...... 或许这就是为什么有些诗歌读过令人怦然而有些诗歌而有些则淡如白水Embarassed......仅为个人平日思索, 盼诗友们切磋.
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 07:06:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
烈日之巅 wrote:
哈哈,白水老师风趣手快,在下考虑到不想被人再误会,所以修改了玩笑,轻浮之处,请老师代各位先生见谅。

晓松兄,你的咏竹诗了得,好诗!等有机会,我赋诗画一幅以和之。另外,我尚饮,有机会当面敬你一杯赔礼。Smile


烈日兄尚饮,那咱们是“酒味相投”!应该我请你。
我常喜欢以酒入诗,其实是“词儿不够,酒来凑”。我的诗,不叫诗,这我心里最清楚。没有章法,不同韵律,就是图个热闹。赞扬,我说声谢谢,心想,这是好人,我还能进步。
这次当选手,也没商量就定了,叫我好生为难。现憋出那几句。
看得出,烈日兄久霸诗坛,烈日下,山之巅,苦心修炼,功底非凡。应该有海量:喝酒——全干!处世——包涵!

晓松,烈日二位诗友酒友和好如初,在下听着大喜过望。不打不成交嘛。不过吃喝多了,斗志就少了。为了再次挑起战火,使双枫两家陷入争斗,在下斗胆和烈总一首君临天下,开个玩笑。得罪之处万望海涵。 Wink

五绝 戏和烈日之颠

烈日当头远,
虚竹腹内空。
折枝学后翌,
挽臂射双雄。

烈日之颠原玉
五绝.君临天下图题画

骨立群山远
蹉跎岁月空
凝眸松石上
万物比何雄
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 07:14:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

他乡客 wrote:
晓松 wrote:
烈日之巅 wrote:
哈哈,白水老师风趣手快,在下考虑到不想被人再误会,所以修改了玩笑,轻浮之处,请老师代各位先生见谅。

晓松兄,你的咏竹诗了得,好诗!等有机会,我赋诗画一幅以和之。另外,我尚饮,有机会当面敬你一杯赔礼。Smile


烈日兄尚饮,那咱们是“酒味相投”!应该我请你。
我常喜欢以酒入诗,其实是“词儿不够,酒来凑”。我的诗,不叫诗,这我心里最清楚。没有章法,不同韵律,就是图个热闹。赞扬,我说声谢谢,心想,这是好人,我还能进步。
这次当选手,也没商量就定了,叫我好生为难。现憋出那几句。
看得出,烈日兄久霸诗坛,烈日下,山之巅,苦心修炼,功底非凡。应该有海量:喝酒——全干!处世——包涵!

晓松,烈日二位诗友酒友和好如初,在下听着大喜过望。不打不成交吗。不过吃喝多了,斗志就少了。为了再次挑起战火,使双枫两家陷入争斗,在下斗胆和一首烈总的君临天下。得罪之处望海涵。

五绝 次韵和烈日之颠

烈日当空远,
虚竹腹内空。
折枝学后翌,
挽臂射双雄。

烈日之颠原玉
五绝.君临天下图题画

骨立群山远
蹉跎岁月空
凝眸松石上
万物比何雄


want to smile sticking tongue
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 07:28:15    Post subject: 歪诗一首 赞北美枫诗人 Reply with quote

(博弈)

(盈盈秋水)(楚天舒)
(墨望山)(暗香如沁)
(九天凤舞)(烟花烫)
(半溪明月)(姚梦痕)
(莹雪)(白水)(江川北)
(晓松)(荷梦)(齐遂林)
(弹剑做歌)(他乡客)
(外山)(远方有佳人)
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躺汉?躺在深山望日月,与世无争逍遥汉;
淌汗?淌出阴暗,流出虚汗;
糖含?含在嘴里弄柔情,甜进心扉馨肝胆;
棠菡?孤芳自赏,孤影留恋;
千万别当我是唐汉,羞对唐,愧为汉。梦回唐汉,何时再现?
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PostPosted: 2007-03-21 08:47:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow, 两位擂主都出手了, 精彩

cup of wine cheers
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现代诗歌的朋友也来了


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一张铁犁 两匹健马
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我是辛劳而快乐的国王
我的王后 王子和公主幸福无比
我没有过多奢求
只望风调雨顺

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像我的王冠一样金黄
王后收起我王权的镰刀
挂于简陋宫殿的梁上

从此 我不再早朝
我去牵马
为我的王子和公主
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