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小草●蚂蚁●大树

岛屿
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Joined: 26 Mar 2010
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Posted: 2010-03-28 00:23:03 Post subject: 小草●蚂蚁●大树

一棵树与土地的距离被小草截断轻飘的腰肢扭动着小草迎合无方向的风有蚂蚁爬上树干咬合自己残缺的梦以寒风中的余温大树默默裹紧它纵然躯体千疮百孔小草依旧在摇蚂蚁还是在爬大树却开满鲜花

安红红
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Posted: 2010-03-28 07:21:48 Post subject:

已读~~意境到了~语言表达方式欣缺些~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-28 09:49:12 Post subject:

人生百相，尊者自尊

岛屿
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Posted: 2010-03-30 05:48:16 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

已读~~意境到了~语言表达方式欣缺些~~

谢关注，远握！

岛屿
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Posted: 2010-03-30 05:49:35 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

人生百相，尊者自尊

问好，远握！

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