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春天 一晃而过(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 04:28:13    Post subject: 春天 一晃而过(组诗) Reply with quote

也说春天

我经常听到春天的音乐
只有一个声部 生机和灿烂
其实赞美有时也隐喻着毒性
现在我看到冬天的尸骸
已经腐败
她们把处子的经血
涂到了春天的脸上 艳丽耀眼

我还知道冬天的伤风
带来的春寒和流感
春风得意的日子
那些荒芜也在疯长
燃烧的欲望 在刀刃上行走
止于一场春雨



正在绽放的桃花

那些在冬天受孕的桃花
正在渐次绽放 分娩
她们痛苦地呻吟
把我坚强的意志摧毁
我的爱人 长大成人
在这花开的季节

我现在还能指出
那些桃花中的一朵
是我的爱人
只是她早已错过花期
一棵渐老的桃树
在这个春天 冒出了新绿


那些花正在说话

我看到那些热情似火
低眉顺眼的花 正在说话
新潮 前卫的时装穿在身上
不能说它们拥有深邃的思想
那些叶子 前呼后拥
试图把那些花儿举得更高

我知道花儿都有高低不一的宿命
不比叶子 像辛勤的农人
起得早睡得更晚
把季节从起点拉到终点

只有站在高处的花儿
知道自己身上的寒意


春天 一晃而过

急性子的春天 似情侣的激情
来得快去得也快
就像我少年的白发
冬天握着鞕子
一鞕子就把春天赶到了夏天

我知道 季节身上也有很多伤口
只是不要轻易触摸
避如上世纪沾在我身上的花粉
给我留下的一道暗伤
每到春天 隐隐作疼

在春天的花丛中唱歌
身后的暗器箭在弦上


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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 04:36:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好,独特的视角写春天,不错,欣赏学习了
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 08:56:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

意象清新,视觉独特,欣赏好诗,问候朋友!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 04:53:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

万禹 wrote:
问好,独特的视角写春天,不错,欣赏学习了

谢谢
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 05:06:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

别样的诗情,拟人化的手法,问好!春安!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 07:05:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

春天多神奇~~软软的掀起内心敏锐的感受~~既让人无比期待~~又令人暗生伤感~~它一边开始着美~~又一边结束着美~~
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 09:52:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

雨,这几首还真不错,寓意于景, 令人深思
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