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【原创】故去的村人

张建文
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Posted: 2010-03-28 02:00:34 Post subject: 【原创】故去的村人

故去的村人 “这个月又走了仨有的还挺年轻------” 回到老家爷爷向我唠叨着村里最近发生的事情话语里满含着无奈与惋惜一个个衰老或并不衰老的生命就这样排着队悄悄走出了村庄消失了踪影谁也无法阻拦谁也不能挽留村庄的记忆因此而越来越薄脆一个人走了村庄里不仅仅只是少了一个人也少了一笔独特的财富就像一棵树倒下去那儿凭空少了一片绿荫许多鸟儿又失去了一个落脚的好去处

安红红
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Posted: 2010-03-28 07:11:13 Post subject:

不错的诗~~结尾很棒~~ 那儿凭空少了一片绿荫许多鸟儿又失去了一个落脚的好去处比喻形象到位~又有深意~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-03-28 09:38:48 Post subject:

欣赏这样的诗歌，走出了局限于抒情，诗意而令人思索。

张建文
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Posted: 2010-04-04 02:43:29 Post subject:

谢谢两位的夸奖，请多多指教。与各位共勉！

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