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五律巴山夜雨

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-03-24 20:36:25 Post subject: 五律巴山夜雨

西南大旱!重庆近日喜降一场春雨,旱情略有缓解. 巴山连夜雨树杪挂流泉幼笋忙出土青牛正向栏花间蝶影舞梁上燕泥攒处处春情动游人醉卧鞍 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

老山
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Joined: 05 May 2007
Posts: 319

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Posted: 2010-03-24 22:07:18 Post subject:

天下及时雨，君抒多情诗。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-25 06:40:10 Post subject:

赞同楼上评语！问好黄老师！

影沉寒水
举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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Posted: 2010-03-25 07:38:40 Post subject:

春雨万物连同人都在复苏 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-03-25 07:58:42 Post subject:

谢老山,笑聊,影沉寒水评点.顺问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2010-03-25 08:20:59 Post subject:

春风吹送及時雨,诗情悠扬上碧空! 黄兄慈悲心赋丰情诗! 问好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-03-25 08:31:19 Post subject:

谢白云兄雅评.问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-03-25 10:27:08 Post subject:

巴山夜雨至，处处春情来。好一幅巴山夜雨春情图！

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2010-03-25 20:21:12 Post subject:

谢庆宏赏阅! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

王君明
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Posted: 2010-03-26 09:41:48 Post subject:

夜雨堪喜，风情如画，学习。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-03-27 05:03:48 Post subject:

谢王兄赐评. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

王国栋
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Posted: 2010-07-09 18:48:31 Post subject:

花间蝶影舞梁上燕泥攒很有“诗情画意”，且对仗工稳！ _________________ 文学是一棵树，我就是树上唱歌的小鸟。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-07-10 05:09:59 Post subject:

谢王兄点评,欢迎你,新朋友! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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