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咏花 --- ( 十 )

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-19 09:22:38 Post subject: 咏花 --- ( 十 )

* 醉吟群芳 * < 调寄渔歌子 > 嫣然展笑奉芳心, 金杯倾倒醉花吟. 凭窗畔, 撫琴音, 暗覚馨香已满襟! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-20 05:45:19 Post subject:

读了白云兄诸多咏花诗词，带来美的享受，仿佛把我们带向自然。让我们感受到自然美！五绝临屏和醉吟群芳美酒饮花间，群芳醉韵闲。沾得馨香露，嫣然展笑颜。

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2010-03-20 06:36:35 Post subject:

春入群芳菲心自醺何况香满襟 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-03-20 09:18:25 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

读了白云兄诸多咏花诗词，带来美的享受，仿佛把我们带向自然。让我们感受到自然美！
...

笑聊兄，和诗三四句的平仄你不小心弄反了。和诗属五绝仄起首句押韵：

仄-平，平-仄。
平-仄，仄-平。

酒-花，芳-韵。
得-香，然-笑。

供参考。问好！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-20 10:35:16 Post subject:

謝笑聊兄和诗! 试将笑聊兄五绝展写七绝唱和,請笑納: 一杯美酒奉花间, 醉咏群芳婉韵闲. 喜得同沾香玉露, 莺歌燕舞笑开顏! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-20 10:36:25 Post subject:

謝影沉寒水赏評! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-20 10:50:02 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏赏讀! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

冰清
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Posted: 2010-03-20 11:27:27 Post subject:

咏花，咏心也！学习白云兄。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-20 15:19:29 Post subject:

謝謝冰清欣赏点评! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

王君明
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Posted: 2010-03-21 07:13:02 Post subject:

问好白云兄。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-21 10:39:35 Post subject:

问好君明兄! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-21 23:15:02 Post subject:

白云兄和词已收藏，谢谢！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-22 09:13:52 Post subject:

謝謝笑聊兄! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-22 21:47:26 Post subject:

七绝-贺白云兄醉吟群芳获得圆满群芳醉韵态千姿,一曲春词酒入诗. 吟出心仪多妩媚,高歌阵阵恰逢时.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-23 09:42:54 Post subject:

謝謝笑聊兄美意! 接口唱和笑聊兄: 高歌阵阵恰逢時, 你唱芳菲我和之. 曲曲心诗多旖旎, 百花园地友朋嬉. _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-03-23 19:33:43 Post subject:

谢谢白云兄唱和!接上七绝再和: 百花园地友朋嬉, 醉眼蒙蒙唱和迷. 魁卉当属梅品艳, 春阳妩媚柳新枝.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-03-24 09:06:09 Post subject:

謝謝笑聊兄唱和! 笑聊兄詞丰韵雅,挥筆诗成!衷心致謝! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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