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我的春天不一样。。。。发三首先,有空的朋友多指点!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-11 00:30:47    Post subject: 我的春天不一样。。。。发三首先,有空的朋友多指点! Reply with quote

【春天】

春风吹拂
万物总喜欢在节骨眼上发芽

骨质增生 风湿疼痛
取出这些骨头
在潮湿的阳光下
潮湿的麻袋上 摊开

一路人驻足问我:
“你这骨头怎么卖?”

【独语】


院内窗沿蔓爬的葡萄又一次抽芽了
还是那么安静 如紧闭八年的那扇窗

桃花开了依旧像胭脂 染红了篱笆
小蜜蜂嗡嗡嗡撇下我
整个下午我还是一直沉默

灯亮了 世界只剩下一扇窗
世界还是像蜡纸一样黄
还是像葡萄枝一样枯

得走了 明天我就要去远方
最舍不得的是那扇窗 目光在那安定了多年
最对不起的是那撮小草 每次都站在它身上
目光瘦了
小草瘦了
在远方我依然会守望同一个方向
问一声小草是否看见过很久不见的窗

【倒流的河】


今日阳光和煦 化开冰冻的身体
被春风唤醒的双眼在睁开刹那流下一汪春水
世界如新
他像刚出母体的幼婴 保持着无知的姿态

母亲微笑着 看着他饥饿如狼的吃相说:
孩子,你成熟了
他看着母亲 想了会说:
那可以吃了吗
母亲拍了拍他的肩膀笑着说:
可以吃饭了

在他低头之余
母亲侧过脸 儿子和一位女孩的合照依然挂在墙上
母亲忍不住热泪盈眶
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PostPosted: 2010-03-12 01:50:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

真的不一样的春天~~
喜欢第二首~
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PostPosted: 2010-03-12 18:15:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

得走了 明天我就要去远方
最舍不得的是那扇窗 目光在那安定了多年
最对不起的是那撮小草 每次都站在它身上
目光瘦了
小草瘦了
在远方我依然会守望同一个方向
问一声小草是否看见过很久不见的窗


让人感动的诗行,问好诗人。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-16 19:15:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常感谢两位诗人阅读!!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 04:44:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

春天】

春风吹拂
万物总喜欢在节骨眼上发芽

骨质增生 风湿疼痛
取出这些骨头
在潮湿的阳光下
潮湿的麻袋上 摊开

一路人驻足问我:
“你这骨头怎么卖?”
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PostPosted: 2010-03-19 22:09:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

不一样的春天,住着一个诗人
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PostPosted: 2010-03-20 00:46:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢朦朦和一果两位诗人!多多指点!!迫切希望能相互切磋商讨诗艺!!
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chenrunmin
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PostPosted: 2010-03-21 05:13:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

院内窗沿蔓爬的葡萄又一次抽芽了
还是那么安静 如紧闭八年的那扇窗

桃花开了依旧像胭脂 染红了篱笆
小蜜蜂嗡嗡嗡撇下我
整个下午我还是一直沉默

灯亮了 世界只剩下一扇窗
世界还是像蜡纸一样黄
还是像葡萄枝一样枯

得走了 明天我就要去远方
最舍不得的是那扇窗 目光在那安定了多年
最对不起的是那撮小草 每次都站在它身上
目光瘦了
小草瘦了
在远方我依然会守望同一个方向
问一声小草是否看见过很久不见的窗
网上第一次看到这么有味的诗,很感动。问好朋友。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-22 22:45:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢楼上朋友,后两个是草就之作,砍砍!!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 00:41:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

桃花开了依旧像胭脂 染红了篱笆
小蜜蜂嗡嗡嗡撇下我
整个下午我还是一直沉默

灯亮了 世界只剩下一扇窗
世界还是像蜡纸一样黄
还是像葡萄枝一样枯

得走了 明天我就要去远方
最舍不得的是那扇窗 目光在那安定了多年
最对不起的是那撮小草 每次都站在它身上
目光瘦了
小草瘦了
在远方我依然会守望同一个方向
问一声小草是否看见过很久不见的窗


真诚的文字!有韵味!问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 21:21:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

根瑶 wrote:
桃花开了依旧像胭脂 染红了篱笆
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感谢根瑶诗人阅读!!多提点!!
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