| 子花 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-22 23:10:36    Post subject: 【夜在别处扎根】--草就望指点 |   |  
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				| 【夜在别处扎根】 
 走了  就不会再回来
 雪花融入了大地  除非以另一种方式抵达故土
 铺天盖地从窗前飘下  穿过昏黄的烛光
 双手却握不住一丁点  只觉寒气冻僵了血液
 
 梦在远方
 梦在一个矛盾着的夜晚
 那是否也飘起了大雪
 你在雪地上是否已经感觉到了空旷
 
 真的走了  就不会再回来了
 思念留在哪儿都一样
 何必留在雪地  那儿冰冷
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		| 根瑶 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 25 Sep 2009
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-23 00:28:41    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 思念留在哪儿都一样 何必留在雪地 那儿冰冷
 
 
 
 抒写一种感想!问好!
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		| 子花 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-23 21:22:55    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢读!!远握并问候!! |  | 
	
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		| 四一果 童生
 
 
 Joined: 13 Mar 2010
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-23 22:01:01    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 颇有古典雪意的味道 |  | 
	
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		| 山城子 榜眼
 
 
 Joined: 23 May 2007
 Posts: 4771
 Location: 中国贵州
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-24 01:49:49    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 问好子花! ——标题耐人寻味!!
 _________________
 诗是人生的雅伴儿。
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		| 子花 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-24 18:18:52    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 问好一果和山城子老师!!多批评! |  | 
	
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
 Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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 Location: TORONTO
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-25 16:45:15    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 真的走了 就不会再回来了 
 那还是别走
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		| 想云枫 童生
 
 
 Joined: 27 Feb 2010
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-28 00:03:06    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 主题和内容有点不谐调。一家之言,不必在意。  ? |  | 
	
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		| 安红红 同进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-28 07:28:13    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 天上下着大雪~~心里下着小雪~~都是冷~~ _________________
 如果不开始,会失去过程。
 QQ:3972083
 微信:qisebaihuayuan
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		| 子花 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-29 23:03:10    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢白水和安红红两位诗人阅读!!问候!谢想云枫兄弟阅读!! |  | 
	
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