qinghongh
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 Posted: 2010-03-18 18:45:39 Post subject: 七绝 和艺芳《与歌今》（新韵） |
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七绝 和艺芳《与歌今》（新韵）
白云深处抚瑶琴，世上知音难觅寻。
流水高山千古唱，瑶琴余韵绕白云。
艺芳原玉：七绝 与歌今
人生苦短怕情真， 情至无极似欲焚。
借问藏身何处是， 白云深处抚瑶琴。 |
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影沉寒水
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Joined: 16 Feb 2010
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Location: 中国福建
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| Posted: 2010-03-19 07:01:11 Post subject: |
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白云深抚处瑶琴
抚处二这好像倒了
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-03-19 08:48:24 Post subject: |
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与庆宏唱和一首旧作:
*何 主 沉 浮*
< 浣 溪 沙 >
自古天涯路漫悠,
人生何以主沉浮?
白云深处泛輕舟!
聊草新詞消浊酒,
任隨清梦逐寒鸥,
樽空人醉解千愁!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-03-19 13:48:32 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云老师和词。谢谢寒水兄关注。“瑶琴抚处”改为“瑶琴余韵”：
白云深处抚瑶琴，世上知音难找寻。
流水高山千古唱，瑶琴余韵绕白云。 |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-03-20 05:14:48 Post subject: |
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白云深抚处瑶琴，
问好庆宏兄！此句有待商榷。前边影沉寒水已提到“抚处二字好像倒了”。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-03-20 06:11:03 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢寒水兄/笑聊兄指出调字时的键误！自己粗心了，没细看。 |
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冰清
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| Posted: 2010-03-20 11:20:37 Post subject: |
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| 性情中人，性情中诗！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-03-20 21:58:33 Post subject: |
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谢谢冰清老师雅赏雅评。 |
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