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金縷曲 庚寅元夕多倫多寄遠
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 09:52:38    Post subject: 金縷曲 庚寅元夕多倫多寄遠 Reply with quote

金縷曲 庚寅元夕多倫多寄遠

雪域繁燈上。
凭空虛、玄冰未冸,峭寒侵掌。
歴歷樓臺憑孤望,澄徹玉壺清曠。
異習俗,難成佳賞。
迢遞海天河漢外,對團圞、萬里嬋娟兩。
今何夕,倍懐想。

故山松菊應無恙。
毋相忘、溪梅乍萼,村醪新釀。
顧曲筵中誰驚座,不識金豐亭長。
倚橫笛,小紅低唱。
留約餞春三月暮,勸東歸、宜趁桃花漲。
攜瑶瑟,泛蘭舫。
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壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 19:46:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

怀旧寄远,情意深长.
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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PostPosted: 2010-03-26 09:45:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

寄远幽抱,动人心弦。犹欣赏下片之婉转。问好虚白词长。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-26 19:12:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝二位詞長賜評!問候!
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