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〖金金作品〗像风

金金
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Posted: 2010-03-18 03:09:39 Post subject: 〖金金作品〗像风

《像风》春天的花园里衣带飘起来草起伏无声它们听不见风行在园中花枝向四方倾斜坐在草坪上便是阳光下的一幅画风，永远卷不走这幅画内容已刻在我心上风儿，也有对你的记忆你就在风露出声音的时候像风那样无形自由徜徉，轻描淡写着在我的心路上作画真实存在且时隐时现 2010年3月18日 15时44分成诗歌 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

骨笛
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Posted: 2010-03-18 03:19:02 Post subject:

有点绕囗。急成的吧? _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-03-18 18:53:34 Post subject:

从外写向内。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

四一果
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Posted: 2010-03-18 20:10:26 Post subject:

清澈的诗，像女诗人一样美的春天。

金金
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Posted: 2010-03-18 22:27:10 Post subject:

问好三位诗友：），确实有急成的感觉。但愿越写越不绕嘴！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2010-03-19 07:55:10 Post subject:

春天的花园里衣带飘起在我的心路上作画真实时隐时现听不见风情 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-19 20:25:44 Post subject:

架构不错

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Posted: 2010-03-20 01:04:47 Post subject:

哥们，换个发型吧！！

金金
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Posted: 2010-03-20 08:09:43 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

哥们，换个发型吧！！ Laughing

暂时不想换：）我贴了几张截图
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nobody
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Posted: 2010-03-20 18:24:53 Post subject:

风格比以前直接明快了。发型很象歌星 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

金金
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Posted: 2010-03-21 01:43:53 Post subject:

nobody老兄，好久不见！！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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