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巫山一段云
君山楚女
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 07:02:28    Post subject: 巫山一段云 Reply with quote

路面风干雨,
海棠露滴香,
垂丝西府荡霞光,
迷眼蝶舞忙。

春燕乍来多语,
与雀哪甘相处。
蓬间梁上各成主,
名花共几许?

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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 07:10:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

垂丝、西府,都是海棠花名。南京莫愁湖公园有世界各种名贵海棠,如东洋海棠,一捧雪海棠,铺地红海棠等等。垂丝、西府只是其中两种。 
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 09:39:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

和君山兄一首詞:

* 赏 海 棠 *
<调寄渔歌子>

莫愁湖里正芬芳,
依稀当年赏海棠.
此美景,
未能忘,
一曲新詞一回望!

多年前,曾到南京旅游,在莫愁湖公园里,欣赏到众多名花.遂以一曲临屏之詞与君山兄唱和!

君山兄,你赋的詞是否:巫山一段"云"?
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 21:07:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白云兄提醒,我已经更正了。在八六年版的五笔字型中,去字是第一号,云字是第三号,敲漏数字键。
您的渔歌子[赏海棠]很好,已经珍藏学习。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-19 06:42:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习君山兄词,知海棠有如此多的品种。弥补了海棠花的知识。谢谢并问好!
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