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一张纸

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-03-17 08:00:44 Post subject: 一张纸

一张纸周道模一张纸漂浮在你的话中一张纸苍白在我的梦里这张纸晃着历史的鬼影这张纸载着时间的前程听纸改了朝的，在痛悔闻纸换了代的，在酒香撕破纸诗中的月光在惊叫…… 点燃纸画上的江山要烧毁…… 2010-1-7 下午于竹林 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2010-03-17 08:36:58 Post subject:

这张纸挺魔幻的,牵动着人的目光,更牵动人的思考. _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-03-17 16:30:13 Post subject:

吟啸徐行 wrote:

这张纸挺魔幻的,牵动着人的目光,更牵动人的思考.

感谢吟君深夜的读评！春天的问候！
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杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2010-03-17 16:49:56 Post subject:

好诗！！！顶！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

刘海
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Posted: 2010-03-17 22:06:48 Post subject:

原来一张纸的内涵如此厚重一张纸的思想如此深刻一张纸蕴藏如此深远的历史感赏读好诗。

金金
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Posted: 2010-03-18 00:22:47 Post subject:

问好：）后边的直觉得简单了，但是依然挺棒的。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-03-18 07:51:40 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

好诗！！！顶！！！

谢谢海军的鼓励！春天好！
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-03-18 07:53:46 Post subject:

刘海 wrote:

原来
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谢谢刘海君的鼓励！春天向你问好！
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-03-18 07:56:24 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

问好：）
后边的直觉得简单了，但是依然挺棒的。

问好金金（先生或女士）！尊重你的意见。
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