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四一果
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Posted: 2010-03-16 05:16:53 Post subject: 左亲右邻

左亲右邻你在我的左边把我看到的两只雨化石看了又看哪一只脚印带着流浪者的鞋子出现在我临场的夜晚向我的一点时光妥协向生者屈服它在我的后面试着半个时辰靠近我的马蹄以及马蹄上奔腾的河流天底下试探的火一路上打发一次便是枫叶而每天做着日常工作的月亮到头来不如起伏的啁啾抱一抱火低吟的火低下头夜晚变成我的脸从唐诗宋词中探出头你咋不来呢月亮是我的左亲太阳是我的右邻

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Posted: 2010-03-16 17:38:41 Post subject:

地球好

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Posted: 2010-03-16 19:37:06 Post subject:

低下头夜晚变成我的脸从唐诗宋词中探出头你咋不来呢月亮是我的左亲太阳是我的右邻 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

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Posted: 2010-03-16 20:58:07 Post subject:

都把我看晕了，少见少见``` 问好！！！！！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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四一果
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Posted: 2010-03-18 04:39:04 Post subject:

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地球好

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Posted: 2010-03-18 05:13:38 Post subject: 欢迎

欢迎新朋友 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2010-03-18 16:47:50 Post subject:

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四一果 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

地球好

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呵呵，白像受伤的水

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Posted: 2010-03-18 16:56:51 Post subject:

向生者屈服它在我的后面试着半个时辰靠近我的马蹄以及马蹄上奔腾的河流

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Posted: 2010-03-18 20:00:33 Post subject:

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低下头夜晚变成我的脸
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问好朋友！

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Posted: 2010-03-18 20:04:44 Post subject:

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都把我看晕了，少见少见```

问好！！！！！

让一朵扶你一把。也问好金金

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Posted: 2010-03-19 22:06:11 Post subject:

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欢迎新朋友

其实，我认识你，因诗歌认识你的人。

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Posted: 2010-03-19 22:07:17 Post subject:

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请朋友指点。

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Posted: 2010-03-20 00:53:55 Post subject:

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都把我看晕了，少见少见```

问好！！！！！

老金，这不是你的强项吗！！哈哈！！

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Posted: 2010-03-23 23:01:07 Post subject:

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四一果 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

地球好

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Posted: 2010-03-25 16:59:53 Post subject:

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四一果 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

四一果 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

地球好

Very Happy

呵呵，白像受伤的水

还一个：
嘻嘻，四只败落的果 Exclamation

Exclamation

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横批：呵呵，嘻嘻

哈，一果，种对联呢

那是我的死穴 Razz

Razz

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Posted: 2010-04-03 03:10:31 Post subject:

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

四一果 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

四一果 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

地球好

Very Happy

呵呵，白像受伤的水

还一个：
嘻嘻，四只败落的果 Exclamation

Exclamation

Very Happy

横批：呵呵，嘻嘻

哈，一果，种对联呢
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我也不会，问好白水！

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Posted: 2010-04-04 03:32:13 Post subject:

哪一只脚印带着流浪者的鞋子出现在我临场的夜晚 ------ 问好四一果！欣赏啦！

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Posted: 2010-04-10 22:18:10 Post subject:

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哪一只脚印带着流浪者的鞋子
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风带着风之林，谢谢风之林

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Posted: 2010-05-05 14:54:48 Post subject:

呀把個太陽和月亮抱近來成為親屬一家人.... 欣賞你的思維..... 很好的沉醉! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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Posted: 2010-05-17 22:35:08 Post subject:

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呀把個太陽和月亮抱近來
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感谢阅读，一分钟沉醉也是福

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